The tired city,
The glittering skies,
I lay outstretched,
Above the heights,
I breathe in slow,
And close my eyes,
I feel the night,
And lullabies,
I open my heart,
And sacrifice,
My sweet dreams,
And my lonely sighs,
All my soul,
And all inside,
I softly smile,
And begin to rise,
Closer to heaven,
I begin to rise.
The Earth deafens,
In its own cries,
And I look down,
In wild surprise,
I extend a hand,
And receive no touch,
I try so hard,
I try so much,
They tug me now,
I begin to lurch,
I fall and fall,
Towards an endless curse.
I lay outstretched,
And close my eyes,
And I smile again,
At my own demise.
Picture - Cover of album Flyleaf by Flyleaf
7 comments:
this is one of the best pieces u've written! amazing stuff!! jussssst!!!
it has meaning, and it definitely conveyes feeling!
Gud Gud...u are out of that 10% who thinks a LOTT!! really!!
that's amazing!! Arkajyoti has very rightly said that dis is one of the best pieces u've written..
A gud idea of yours, and a gud thinking.. Great work!!
All d Best !!
Very nice and thoughtful....one can really connect to it. waiting for regular updates
wah-wah wah-wah
Gud!!!
well placed emotion and really deep thought!!!
but sorry to be critical but sum expression are not rightly matched.
but yaar i m getting to much into it..
fabulous work done man!!!
Proud of u!!!
I feel the night,
And lullabies,
I open my heart,
And sacrifice,
nice creation of ur's........continue ur work ra.......all the best....
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