Nov 25, 2011

Reverie (Part 1)



The stars were twinkling softly as she lay quietly on the grass. The breeze carried the sweet intoxicating smell of the night. The silvery glow of the dancing grass made the hill look enchanted. The soft rustling of the leaves of the nearby trees were in exact tune with the melodious whine of the gentle wind. The valley beneath lay tranquil; the lake rippling to the wind quietly. Faraway the mountain range lay lost in the foggy darkness. The moon quietly reigned over the mesmerizing landscape.

It was her favourite place. The only place where she could escape to; she loved to escape to. Every night she would come here and look up at the stars. And she would stop worrying. Stop thinking. She would smile.

And she would remember him. And how if he had been here everything would've been different. How she would have been happy again.

6 comments:

The Poet said...

Hello.
Beautiful albeit bittersweet memories.
Nice imagery.
Thanks for sharing.

Thanks or visiting. I always try to return the kindness & have become your newest follower too.

Thanks also for attending/participating at the Party. Once all the guests have attended, I shall compile the poem & post it on my blog. Copies, credits & links will be given to each guest.

Thoughts Of Beauty In The Stillness Of Dawn

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Hi Gopinath :)

So glad I surfed in here from Andy's site. You write so BEAUTIFULLY! Your words touch my heart and paint such lovely imagery.

Best wishes for the party results :)
Fiona ~ your latest reader :)

Gopinath said...

Thanks Andy...for a wonderful blog party and an opportunity to interact with the blogging community...

Thanks Fiona...nature has always been my inspiration...

Shreya said...

Beautiful words, nicely framed. Will surely visit soon for another part. :)

P.S. my first visit here, loved being here. :) God bless :)

http://www.iredeem.blogspot.com/

Gopinath said...

Thanks for visiting Shreya...

Prosenjeet said...

Lovely. Guess romance is your genre though I haven't gone through all your posts but will eventually.